Catchy, but slightly too repetitive
At the beginning, I see that you looped your music over and over again for more than 8 measures. Although the introduction was really good and attention-grabbing, and the music itself was catchy and nice, it was definitely two repetitive, and was only made up of two seperate sections, over three minutes. Furthermore, the second one didn't have much related to the first one... so... that could be improved on.
thanks for your opinions.. and i agree it gets repetitive but i will definitely be working on it some more. so look out for the new version soon
Has a unique theme with good variations.
Well, this is a nice piece with a unique name, so I gave a listen. What I like about this piece is the variety you presented with the main theme (you introduced instruments such as strings and flutes along the way). The drums were also pretty wonderful too.
However, the strings sounded a little too grainy and made the speakers crack. Also, the piece, frankly doesn't seem to lead to anything either; the ending was generally unsatisfying D=. The theme should become more complicated as time goes on, I think; though you presented variations, they weren't quite being 'built on'.
All in all, I'll say nice job. Thanks for the song.
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