Absorbing
It's really good for a trance song, seeing that it was really, really varied and everything. I loved the downward chord progression and the piano the first time round, though it lost its impact partly the second time round. I have not heard the original (or even the game, actually), but wow, well done.
A suggestion would be for you to introduce a break in the drumbeats and perhaps show the piano melody line in all its glory, with accompianment, of course. Nicely done, keep it up!
Yeah, I'll get a redone x 2 version whenever I can.
Thank you! :3
Wow.
Well, your work puts mine to shame. Just when I THINK that I have composed a nice sonata, I hear this and my effort goes down the drain. This is definitely high quality. Simply put, it's amazing, though I feel it might be a little rough for a Nocturne. The only thing I hold against the piece is that the ending seems a little weak as compared to the rest of the piece, though it really is a nice extension of theme 2. Bleh, before I go about copying the other guy's review, I'll say thank you.
Yeah I agree, I began to realize it might be a little intense for a Nocturne. And wow, you totally echo my feelings about the ending. Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!
Catchy, but slightly too repetitive
At the beginning, I see that you looped your music over and over again for more than 8 measures. Although the introduction was really good and attention-grabbing, and the music itself was catchy and nice, it was definitely two repetitive, and was only made up of two seperate sections, over three minutes. Furthermore, the second one didn't have much related to the first one... so... that could be improved on.
thanks for your opinions.. and i agree it gets repetitive but i will definitely be working on it some more. so look out for the new version soon
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